"Katherine opened her eyes. Still cloaked in the blue flames she stood before a clear crystal cairn a foot away. Imbedded in the uppermost section of crystal was a circlet sparkling like a crown of intricately braided, silver laser filaments. The circlet rose through the crystal to hover above the cairn. Two blue flames detached themselves from her arm and when they touched the circlet became two blue gems. The silver, blue gemmed circlet floated toward her and, it descended to rest upon her head"
An excerpt from my book!
THIS is the excerpt you chose to show off your writing? THIS? I shudder to think of what the rest is like.
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